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Zootopia General: Cosplay Edition
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Anonymous 03/14/17(Tue)13:59:42 No.8174899 Report >>8174939 >>8174971 >>8175011 >>8175023 >>8175059 >>8175068 >>8175073 >>8175253 >>8175346
Let's try something positive.
Which writers here do you guys enjoy? It can be greentexters, on going fic writers, or one-shot authors.
Last thread got me curious.
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>>8174933
Fair 'nough.
I still don't think Judy is hot, and I'm gay.
From that perspective I can still see why people obsess over Nick more. He's a more intriguing character with a backstory that lends itself more to drama and other types of stories. Not to say Judy isn't interesting in her own right, but her personality doesn't scream hot or worth obsessing over.
Plus furries prefer foxes in general. I don't, but I do think Nick is hotter than Judy.
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I still think there are good writers out there. BoneyM and Beaver are sweet, and we even got some new writers who are trying some different stuff. I definitely don't think they deserve the title of "leftover." Writing fics isn't easy.
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>>8175068
I just don't like seeing people pointlessly shat on.
I personally don't see a problem. It's fine to feel bad about not getting mentioned, but not everyone does. I'm not asking to toss on the guilt. I'm asking the highlight the positives.
Not everything has to be turned into a pity party or an attack.
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>>8175068
I was never mentioned for a long time, but it didn't make me sad--it made me want to get better until I got on someone's list. The thing about improving is that you need to have the drive to say "fuck that," and redouble your efforts when things don't go your way.
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>>8175111
This. I'm a drawfag so I know it's not the same thing, but when I'm not mentioned it doesn't make me sad. If I get mentioned it means someone likes what I do, and that's great! If I don't that's all the more reason for me to try harder.
Besides, not everyone checks the thread every day. Maybe there's someone out there who likes what you do, but they weren't around that day. Happens man.
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>>8175162
I'm tired and might just pass out soon, but honestly I'm thinking of doing another Pack Street related story involving a bored camping trip between Remmy and the aardwolves turning into pure kinky sex. The idea feels so natural. Especially since they'd do stuff like skinnydipping, spitroasting, and more feeling the natural rush of semi-public nudity...
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>>8175183
I also feel like people who ask for help are more likely to get noticed as well. When people acknowledge their struggles, it tells us that they're trying to become a better writer or artist. At least for me, I see asking for help as a more intense desire to improve, not as a weakness.
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I've seen a lot of tutorials on drawing, but barely any on writing.
Authors of /ztg/, what are tips you recommend to help make better stories? What are some things to keep in mind, especially when writing about animals?
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>>8175330
Read lots. Read what seems like high quality fanfiction in terms of Zootopia. Read things related to other fandoms.
Write scenes that are disconnected but convey a certain mood. Share them around. Keep reading more as you're writing, and get to a full one-shot when you feel ready.
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Ok that's a helpful website.
>>8174053
I'm sure there are. I wanna download Google Docs (>>8174099) but need to delete some stuff first.
>>8174188
Believe me, I wanna share, but I don't feel comfortable yet with the drafts I have. Someday for sure.
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>>8175330
Plan everything before hand. If you feel like you're getting stuck on a line, move on to the next one. 80% of writing is editing. The only cure for writer's block is to write. If you only write when you have inspiration, you will write a piece very six months, so don't wait around for it.
Plot tied allegories are fucking difficult, focus on surface level shit. Trust your audience to fill in gaps, and cut everything that doesn't absolutely need to be there.
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>>8175330
Not that much of a writer, and this more for the editing stage, but I personally think these tips should be used. Instead of writing something like "closed his eyes in pain", go with "slammed his eyes shut". Give context to your stories; tell the reader how your character is feeling through expressions rather than saying exactly how they feel.
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Man, this is way easier than writing.
Anon's probably right. It's not worth it to write if you're not already good.
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I don't think my style is suited for this thing.
Which is weird since I only shade/color my work like 50% of the time.
Not gonna spam the thread. Just thought I'd try the site out.
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>If you have any young friends who aspire to become writers, the second greatest favor you can do them is to present them with copies of The Elements of Style. The first greatest, of course, is to shoot them now, while they’re happy. – Dorothy Parker
The Elements of Style:
>http://www.jlakes.org/ch/web/The-elements-of-style.pdf
I think the best advice there for writers is to read more. Read, analyze, dissect, think what works and what doesn't, what you like in particular text and try finding a rhythm.
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>>8175795
This is really hot.
My gut tells me that Hugh is for draining the balls of needy gay/bi guys, though... I must confess.
This is probably a result of me wanting him as a boyfriend, probably, which is kind of pathetic but hey... he is nice.
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Anons, I have asked for many of your requests, but for one time, I have one.
I saw a prompt in the previous thread
>Drunk Mrs. Otterton finding "comfort" with Judy during the time her husband is savage
And then my mind wandered, at what that flexible and experienced body could do, at the possibilities...
In short, if some writefriend could do something like this (obviously without rape, extreme fetishes, etc.), I will draw it, no matter how lewd it gets. I promise.
Sorry if I have bothered you, now I'll go back to TT.
>>8175377
If I share my shitty writing you can do it too.
>>8175330
I think I have a little something that could help.
Wait a moment that I search through the files.
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>>8175951
>How extreme a fetish is outside your range?
The usual: watersports, vore, inflation, extreme BSDM, fattening, rape, pedo, etc.
That sort of thing. If someone wants to fulfil such an egoistic desire I want that to be something that the majority of the thread could enjoy too
>>8176034
>winging it
What?
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>>8176035
Awww, Betty's even covering the Ram with her tail. That's really cute man, thank you for doing my request.
Honestly V, this is not something you should be reading up on at this point in the relationship. At least not in public.. then again maybe its a quick reference sheet in case she forgets something.
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>>8176032
This is the natural color of an egyptian wolf.
Unless Avo dyes her fur, she's likely colored similar to this.
The outline actually would still match the darker parts of this coloration, I think.
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Gauging interest
story about a human (who knows nothing of Zootopia) who ends up in Zootopia (as an animal)
Attempts to play up the comedy in fish-out-of-water, particularly in all the various faux-pas the person would inevitably make. Would have the character attempt (but fail) at romance, so it's not smutty Mary/Gary Sue in Zootopia.
Yea or nay?
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>>8176137
Human In Zootopia is generally frowned upon because no one has ever done it right. It's always: human is just self-insert of author, human is gets in the way of main characters, contrived reason why human is still allowed to roam free despite being and oddity, etc.
There's always been issues with it but as >>8176165 says: give it shot. But keep it short. Most won't bother with a fic like that if it's novel-length.
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Ehem...
>"Mm, so you've heard of me after all."
>I glance around through the open door, watching as Wolt runs past the front counter, manned by a tall black--
>Oh no.
>Avo glances up at Wolt with a look of mild annoyance. As she tracks his movement past her, she spots the open door.
From The Heist
> by a tall black--
Mystery solved.
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>>8176307
Oh I wasn't trying to imply those were her canon colors with my coloration.
I just wanted to see what she'd look like if she were colored like an actual egyptian wolf was.
I think it looks kinda neat really.
I honestly didn't know what color she was. Must've missed that part while reading.
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>>8176348
Some of Weaver's work showed her fully black colored. Do not have it, But I am sure I saw it here.
Also her black coat was called "canon color" here a few times in the past.
>>8176343
>Oh I wasn't trying to imply those were her canon colors with my coloration.
Oh I did not mean anything by that, I just wanted to point out this quote that I remembered. I believe it was only time her color was brought up in any way.
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>>8176415
It is. I was the one coloring Avo.
>>8176395
That's fine! Maybe there's a type of egyptian wolf with actual coloration like that? I couldn't find one in my search so I went with what I did find. If that's the case she's likely colored like anubis, though I don't think any real-world wolves/jackals have that coloration. I could be wrong.
If that's true, maybe she DOES dye her fur. She seems like the type, actually.
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>>8176540
I looked, and I tried to set days aside to work on it. Sadly life has been preoccupying me. I've only had time to do little doodles. It's why I'm behind on the shorty update too.
I could have done it on that day I streamed, but I streamed instead. That's on me, and I'm sorry.
Haven't even had time to change what type of fox she is yet.
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>>8176476
It looks kinda like a pamphlet.. which raises questions, are there pamphlets for all interspecies relations? Who makes them and where are they sold at?
>>8176443
Kinda hope that's not the official color set, don't really like it at all. Then again I already don't like her so its not really that big of a deal...
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>>8175753
Indeed, it's a waste of both reader's and writer's time. If you can't write something pack street, arcf, wutb or falke stuff you should really stick to spamming your machine drawings. At least people don't take minutes to say its shit.
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>>8176586
Or maybe it's wolf themed smut magazine. Maybe one targeted specificaly to prey who want some knots.
Who makes them? Well it's porn and when you make porn there will always be an audience no matter how wierd it is.
Maybe Pred mags for Prey are something like interracial BBC porn. Young pure prey desacrated by the predator and other shit like that.
But with this one I would bet it would be a just a wolf themed porn mag.
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Hey guys it's writeyote here! reShilling my newest fic, Snow is Gone. It's your run of the mill wildehopps fluff, down to the bunnyburrow vacation. Expect it's all in ryhming verse. The whole damn thing. It'd mean a lot it me if you giys would check it out! Since I spent way too much time on it.
http://pastebin.com/XFwk0rhn
It's also Inspired by this song please check it out as well: https://youtu.be/NJZiojEGuy0
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>>8176790
>Post what you have in pastebin and I'll give feedback.
i'd rather vent anonymously. it's easier.
that said, i just feel as if i'm not improving, and not worth noticing compared to other fic writers.
i believe i'm decent, but not good enough, and i don't feel as if any of the critique i've received so far has pointed me in a better direction.
it'd be easier to learn art. artists get noticed, even when they're bad or just learning. writers have to rely on other writers for anything.
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>>8176821
>it'd be easier to learn art.
I think you're underestimating artists. Both are insanely fucking difficult to learn.
There are some artists who learn quickly, but many of the artists here likely have at least a decade under their belt. Hell some have two.
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>>8176819
Well I'm alive. Haven't left the threads at all, just haven't been writing much lately. Life since December was one disaster after another but doing a lot better now.
I didn't know anyone actually wanted more of my fic so that kinda detracted me. But now that I do I'll be sure to give it another look!
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>>8176706
>Story begins that two Unknown...Beings seem to fight each other or at least one of them throws the other down a waterfall
>Timeskip
>Judy and Nick are assigned to interrogate..well something noone really knows what it is in the hospital.
>"They" got fished out of an River
>When they reach the Hospital thex find out that the Being barricadet itself in the Room.
>After they manage to get in the room, the Being flees by moving out from the window.
>A chase begins
> Chase ends with being fleeing on a three.
>Talks and Discusses with Judy
>Agrees to get down and to be questioned
>It's revealed that they are a female.
>Reveals that she believes that she is a human
>But can't remember many things. Not much about her past live
>Only that she thinks that there was a War and she got injured
>That's why both arms and legs are kind of "robotic prostheses"
>Any search about humans only lead to old folk tales or myths. (Like Greek or Nordic Mythology)
>After it's clear that she is not a threat it's decidet that she should try to be integrated in Zootopian Society.
>Meanwhile it would be searched for clues of the Humans origin.
>Of course Press and Journalists are curious
>Meanwhile Judy gets invited by "Frame Technologics."
>A company that in nearly no time became a big and great company
>Builts far advanced devices.
>Mostly for privat use like extensions for mobile phones or cars
>Judy is greeted by "Mr.Wolpeting" a wolf (maybe?) and Head of the company
>Explains to Judy that he admires her and what she did for Zootopia and the message she spread.
>As a gift he gives her the newest invention of Frame Technologics. The "vitaal writband" as he calles it. It's called like that because Wolpetinger believes that it will be such a great sucess that everyone wants to have it.
>It's a multi functional device that will makes many devices redundant.
<will be continued>
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No I'm not
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>>8176821
Art is easy, barely require any thought aside from muscle memory, you also can make easy money from fetish art and no matter how bad you are people will suck your dick. Meanwhile writing requires deep introspection and hours of brainstorming before you can put anything on paper, nobody but only the people who actually read more than just anime fansubs will appreciate it and more often than not you won't get feedback. Hell people think Mead is writing WutBurrows, this community is a fucking mess to writers while sucking dick of people who draw. Just look at Spin and Sprinkah fanbase.
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>>8177048
The idea of humans as a myth is kind of cool, and it sounds like you're ready to write some kind of first chapter.
Watch out for grammar issues and spelling. I can see you've already got quite a few in this greentext alone.
Try to write some paragraphs down, and see how it goes.
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>>8177048
>Wolpetinger also asks Judy that if she also could test it for his company to say if there could be anything improved
>Meanwhile she, the human found herself a flat and a job in an electric repairshop.
> Crimes happen arround Zootopia
>Some Town Cuncil members are going missing for 24 Hours but appear later again, all with some weird different reasons.
>In Computer Science, Engeneering etc. Companys Technology and Machines are stolen.
>Security tapes only shows a shadowy figure.
>Judy and Nick one time nearly catch the thief, but he escapes trough the vents in some..."odd" way.
>Information for the Human are found
>Old Cocuments are found and an Eye Witness
>It's revelaed that the Human is not...real
>She is a Robot to look like what Zootopians believed what a Human might look like
>That was 60.50 Years ago
>There was a Society of Animals who were fascinated by Human myths and legends.
>And one of them decidet to built a robot to what they imagined humans migh look like
>Also that person buolt another robot
>The Society believed that one day the humans will come back
>The Man and the others tried to form this robot so he could decidet what they should prepare
>Machines says that all Predator Animals have to be inslaved
>Society agrees since the members are only Prey Animals
>The Shock Collar is invented
>But with the first shock collar the machine reveals something else too
>Not only Predator but also Prey Animals have to be inslaved, so that the Humans could find a Utopia the machine "calculated"
>The Machine is shut down and sealed away, so is the Human Robot
>On an old record the "Creator" of both robots says that his "Prophet" machine is too dangerous
>The Eye witness states that the "Creator" was never really seen, he isolated himself in a room. Noone knows how he really looked. He only left the Building deep at night
<will be continued>
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>>8177212
Doesn't mean art isn't hard.
Of course people are going to pay more attention to art. It's a visual medium and visuals are easier for the human brain to absorb. He shouldn't shit on artist and act like art is easy to do just because people prefer to look at things than read them, or because the general consensus is to give blind praise to any piece of art they see. That's not the fault of the artist, many of who have genuinely dedicated their lives to get to where they are now and continue to do so.
He's just butthurt because he's not getting any attention for his writing, which I personally think fucking sucks for him. I genuinely, GENUINELY feel writing is more difficult to get get right and learn, and have a lot of respect for those who do. When people shit on writefags I'm usually one of the first people to speak up about them being underestimated and underappreciated, because I've tried writing before. It's not easy. You can't just write and expect it to be good any more than you can scribble and expect it to be good. It's all about perception of the audience.
And that sucks for writefags, but that doesn't mean drawing is easy. I encourage everyone to try it, but you're retarded if you think it's as easy as putting paper to pencil.
Yes I mad.
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>>8177108
Drawing isn't easy, it is simply easier to consume for the average person. Anyone can look at a picture and give instant feedback/have gratification right then and there. Meanwhile, processing a written story takes much more time. Authors are simply going to get less attention naturally due to time constraints/attention spans.
Drawing and Writing take different skills, and are equally as hard in their own way.
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>>8177173
Yes maybe someone learns differently but considering everything you'd be retarded to say art is hard, art is just braindead practicing, writing at least forces you to think for a bit. That's why so many comics have dogshit writing, they're not used to thinking.
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>>8177434
Just reminds me I miss Pandanon... I wonder if he's still kicking about around here. What other musical duders do we got? Bunner is like the only other one that comes to mind.
>>8177450
Its cool man, everyone's got different tastes.
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>>8177408
I don't condone attacking writefags. I actually don't know how this plays into this at all considering drawfags are the ones being 'attacked' (and I use the term loosely. Drawing itself is what's being criticized).
On top of that I do vouch for writefags, and I think it's shitty that they feel this way, despite understanding why.
I'll admit I need to calm down, though.
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>you'd be retarded to say art is hard
This is why I can tell you're not an artist. You're not wrong that it's not as difficult as writing, but it's not easy, and you actually do have to think to draw. Learning and practicing the basics is how you get it down yeah, but it takes more then braindead practicing to make GOOD art. You have to observe the world around you and think outside the box. Just drawing from memory is never enough.
I hate going here, but usually other artists can tell shit art better than non-artists, and it's statements like this that also indicate whether or not the person talking has ever tried drawing or not.
>>8177464
This. Actually that'd be interesting to see. If anon wants to draw for (You)s then it'd be a good chance anyway. He may as well.
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>>8176821
If you want, i can give you feedback too. I'm still new around here, but helping others to improve is one of my motivations. And don't go for easier, do what you really want to do. Pass the link, dude.
>>8176858
Learn art (as writing, composing or drawing) is hard, and "do" art is harder. But persistence and practice is the key. Also good teachers, feedback, and everything that can help you improve.
Posting my last practice, sorry for not being zootopia related.... yet.
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>>8177362
Giving feedback to writers is more difficult. I guess the people who gives that kind of feedback is the better type of follower for an artist. Be that person, anon. Do it for Byron.
>>8177434
hardest form of art to learn, not too much music makers here. Don't know, tho.
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>>8177450
Same. Not exactly a year but close enough. I don't really find him hot; I'd want to be his friend, think he might be a good drinking buddy, but I haven't turned gay for the fox.
Judy, on the other hand, just hits all the right buttons for me. Petitie top, wide hips, cheerful personality. Also helps that rabbits in Zootopia are much more "humanized" than the rest of the animals, while Nick simply looks like a fox standing on two legs.
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Post bittersweet music, I need to expand my playlist.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ApUECvQ8gXU
Stuff like this.
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>Whilst the human now revealed to be a robot is a bit scared, she's also relived that she know now the truth
>The "Creator" also says he uses "Fake Memorys" for his creation so she would be more human like.
>Therefore the past about war was a fake memory
>Meanwhile Wolpetinger decides also to join politics
>His vital Wristbands 1.0 are already realeased and an instand hit. Everyone likes them and the gimmicks that come
>Meanwhile the human begins acting strange
>One day, another electro company is robbed bit this time the robber/thief is posed.
>The Human
>Claims that she wanted to make and create something beautiful.
>Talks some gilberish in the name of humanity and somthing
>Judy and Nick are shocked because not only did they trust her
>But also believed that she kind of alive and knew meanwhile what was right and wrong
>They are dissapointed
>Suprisingly fast the human goes to prison
>Nick has one last conversation with the robot/human
>There is not much excet anger and dissapointment
>Human just asks for one last request
>Nick should read the books she gives to him.
>Meanwhile Judy gets another invite from Wolpetinger
>He invites Judy with some other people to a dinner.
>The wolf wants to celebrate his sucess with the vital wristband
>Since Judy helped him in thesting his prototyp she is of course invited
>The Party is at the now "Frame Technologys" Factory Building.
>Which was the former Night Howler Research Center
>Wolpetinger shows how he changed the facility for the good.
>At the dining room the other guests have already arrived,
>The town council members
>Wolpetinger says that now finally his plan is going to work
>and he wants that Judy is part of it
>To enslave all Predator and Prey Animals so this world is pure and ready for the humans. How he saw it 60-50 Years ago.
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>>8177108
>only the people who actually read more than just anime fansubs will appreciate it
I just wanted to draw attention to this spicy burn here. That's worded so well and inserted so perfectly you hardly notice it's in there until after you've read it and agreed with it. That's a level of insult that you just don't see much these days.
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>>8176307
Ehem...
>"Tough shit, grazer," a low voice sneers from behind me.
>Turning in place, I look up into the piercing eyes of a tall, slender, chestnut-furred jackal.
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>"Real big of you to tattle, grasseater," a low, smooth, vaguely familiar voice comments.
>I blink, looking around. It's dark in here to begin with, but with the stairwell casting a heavy shadow over the nearby recliner I didn't even notice someone else was in the room with me.
>Squinting into the blackness I can barely make out the same jackal that was giving me shit earlier, taking a smoke break.
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>"Man, you really are a stick in the mud."
>Casually, the jackal reaches a claw up and pops the stick from her mouth, revealing the 'cigarette' to actually be a lollipop.
From Wooly Bully
>tall, slender, chestnut-furred-
Mystery renewed.
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>Judith Hopps, mid-fourties, mother of one, decorated veteran of the ZPD.
>Nicholas Wilde, II, fifteen year old delinquent, adopted son of Judy Hopps.
>Evil bunny-casted magic brings a recently dead Nick back to life in a new body.
>Judy has to deal with incessant flirting and the occasional underage todd sneaking into her bed.
>She keeps telling him to wait until he's eighteen, but the horny todd just won't quit.
>The last time she'd come home from a long shift, he was sitting on the livingroom couch, pants down to his ankles, beating off to some of hers' and Nick's home-made movies.
>He didn't even have the shame to stop when she'd yelled his name. He'd just asked her to close the door and help him along, complaining that his poor wrist was hurting.
>And during her last birthday, when a few dozen of her sisters and aging mother had visited, he'd had the gall to slip a paw down her pants when her sister Violet was right beside them.
>It wasn't that she didn't still have a whole lot of fire in her, she just didn't like the idea of comitting statutory rape.
>It apparently wasn't the same thing with him, though. If anything, it was the complete opposite. She remembered, some time before his death, him mentioning he liked the 'milf' look Violet and her own mother were 'rocking.'
>But now, as she lays in bed with Nick II spooning against her, in the nude as always, she couldn't find the resolve to fight the fire inside her.
>It definately didn't help that he was resting the tip of his muzzle against the old mark he'd given some twenty years ago.
>She just has to keep telling herself, 'three more years,'
>Letting her muscles finally relax, she felt herself almost slip away into an enjoyable sleep.
>Almost.
>Nick II dug his teeth into his old mark, and she let out a groan that would have made her sister Lewdy blush.
>"Fine!" she all but yelled, and tore her neck from his maw. It stung, but she didn't care.
>She pinned him beneath her, and glared at his smug face.
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>>8177640
>Not only Wolpetinger reveals to be a robot but also the town council members and other guests are.
>He tells Judy that he thinks that she is the only one capabel to be pure ennough that she can be in an "independent" form be ready to see the Humans
>The Vital Wristbands are nothing more than a modern version of the shock collar
>Animals would obey or they get shocked
>Wolpetinger will activate a signal that will at first affect Zootopia, then later the whole wolrd
>With the politics in his hand, he can make laws where this would't look "too suspicious"
>Like the prophecy told, like he calculated
>He has to make this wolrd pure and the humans would appear.
>Judy declines, and wants to flee
>She gets captured
>Meanwhile the Human in Prison is in the Library
>Sets a Puzzle together, talks with an inmate
>Tells the inmate how she knew it
>But she couldn't do anything
>She was used like a marrionet, and forced.
>Also she, the Human knows that Wolpetinger will abduct her in any second
>And so it happends.
>Nick meanwhile goes to the Humans flat.
>Opens the book and finds a tape
>Listens to the tape in an tape recorder that lies prepared in the flat
>It reveals that the Human like Robot got threatened
>If she dosen't claim to made the burglarys. Nick and Judy would die.
>Nick reconices the voice from one of the many commercials
>It's Wollpetingers
>Also on his way to the fascility he gets the information that the "Creators" name was also Wolpetinger
>Judy wakes up
>Finds herself in a small cage
>When she looks arround she sees that the town coumcil members and the other guests are here too the real one this time
>The human robot got disembodied
>legs and arms removed and moved to a nearby table
>Tells Judy that she's sorry, but she had to do it.
>Either way she would, or Wolpetinger would have used his robots to kill her and or Nick
>Nick finds Judy and the human
>The human is put together
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>She eventually wants Al to be rougher with her throughout their relationship
>He gets to stop being so delicate with her and pound her hard with his thick cock
>She still makes those fragile noises he likes
God yes, someone please write this
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Ah yes. There we go. Hit my stride again, and I feel renewed.
>>8177982
>I'm gonna give you the mother of all bittersweet
Already got this on there. Thanks though!
>>8177828
First one's exactly the kinda thing I was looking for, thanks!
>>8177872
Ahhhh, this is fantastic but isn't on Spotify.
I think I can download it and add it to my playlist somehow, though.
>>8178025
I like In Dreams, and I've heard Motorcycle Drive By before. Never knew the name/artist, though. Thanks!
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>>8178009
>They decide that they have to stop Wolpetinger, then they free the caged people
>One of the Prisoners tells them that Wolpetinger is probably in the control room he once mentioned.
>It's in the highes floor on the building, to create the best signal
>They run trough the rooms and corridors
>The Robots Wolpetinger created are revealed to be killer machines
>Either way they destroy or avoid them
>They reach the control room
>Before they go in they trie to come up with a plan
>They have to deactivate the machine Wolpetinger uses.
>When they go in, Wolpetinger dosen't seem to be here
>Until they see his head hanging down the celling
>The wolf appearance ecxept for the head is lost
Wolpetinger looks like a mixture of wire, cabels, robotic and metallic parts and tubes everywhere.
>Says in deeper voice that he is the Prohphet
>He is creating the Way for the Humans
>He is Everything
>He is the Solutions
>They reach Wolpetinger Machine.
>But only for a short time. After the Humam Robot tiped a bit they a pushed away.
> By Wolpetingers many limps.
>Wolpetinger prepares to activate his machine
>The roof opens and a antenna is revealed.
>Wolpetinger announce a new era.
>The Human Robot asks Judy if she could give him her prototyp wristband.
>Since the Shock wristband would affect her probably too
>The machine is activated
>The Signal send
>The command the wristband shall shock...
>fails
>Only one wristband is activated
>The Prototyp Judy had.
>Affects the Robot.
>The Robot changed the frequence of the shock collar
>It affects only the Prototyp now
>Therefore the robot
>Robot jumps and Wolpetinger
>Both get heavily electrecuted
>Wolpetinger tries to get rid of her
>In his panick Wolpetinger smashes a bigh window and falls with the Human Robot in the water.
>Some kind of electric thunderbolt underwater appears.
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>She made have been older, now. A bit more stiff in the joints.
>But her muscles never faded. She had stamina, and resilience.
>Throwing off her panties, and hiking her night gown up, she straddled her disobedient little todd.
>Hooking her feet between the small of his back and the bed, she ground her pussy against his quickly encorged sheath, and slid it along his growing cock.
>She didn't even wait for him to fully harden. Grooving her hips forward one last time, she slid what length of his was exposed into her, and sat up straight.
>Ofcourse, he didn't wait either, and grabbed at her breasts while letting out a grunt and hissing out the word 'Yes,'
>They moved in tandem, as if the fifteen years of sexual hiatus between them had never happened.
>Bringing herself up with the muscles of her thighs, she dropped down as he thrust up, and the bed beneath them creaked with the soft, muffled sound of their hips meeting.
>He let out a strange moaning yelp, and his paws quickly grasped and dug into her thighs and she lifted herself back up.
>As she dropped back down and he came up to meet her, she felt that bulbous knot she'd been missing for years. As it popped into her, she looked down at Nick II's face, and admired the sight she'd missed so much.
>He canines were visible, one digging into his bottom lip. His eyes were squeezed shut, and one of his ears kept twitching.
>She may have been overstimulating him, she thought as she pulled her hips back up, letting his knot pop out of her.
>Pausing for a minute, she shifted around so that she was on her knees, and braced both of her paws on his shoulders.
>He was looking at her with dazed, longing eyes, and slightly panting. She'd pay him back for everything, tonight.
>Without warning, she dropped her hips down against his, and before he could blink, she'd bounced her hips up and slammed back down again, hit knot slipping in and out with a quick wet pop.
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<last one>
>The robot re calibrates itself
>Wakes up, once again the hospital
>Judy and Nick are here
>Probably some emotinal Moments???
>Fox and Rabbit explain that she was found in the river somewhere, also the remains of Wolpetinger
>His vital wristbands became kind of useless
>After Wolpetingers sheme got revealed noone anyway wanted to wear those things
>Say that Robot saved Zootopia
>Human Robot declines
>Judy and Nick did it
>Because they put her together, stopped the killer machines and also helped in reaching machines
>She just typed in a simple frequence number
>Robot asks what now? Is there some purpose left.
>She's a robot, not an animal
>Judy and also Nick tell her that she can be anything what she wants to be here
>The "Human" dosen't know for shure, but says that she still wants to remain here in Zootopia, helping again in that Repair/ Technical Service Shop.
>Also says that she's glad to have found some friedns during her time here.
>They are interrupted
>They Eye Witness from earlier who helped to find out the robots past appears back
>Says that they found a last record of the Creator
>They all listen to it
>"You know there is something about Zootopia I have to complain. I can't find shoes withous those animal traits. Not one of those suits me."
>Story ends
I hope you enjoyed in reading my Fanfiction Idea.
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>>8178812
I agree but I'm also tired of seeing Remmy being the one fucked. Let him have some fun with the large tigress, dammit! Have her barking orders at him so he takes a bit more action and fucks her silly! She seems to brighten his mood and be a good sort of support for him, so it'd be fitting.
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>>8178969
nooooooooooooooooooo
death by niggies :(
SAD face
a very sad face I am making right now
baby tears are in my eyes
I try to wipe them but they keep coming
the sloth is dead by niggie asphyxiation
was is purposeful? (<---question mark)
maybe so
so that means investigation is to launch, right after another
we hunt kill who those death to our sloth
find and destroy them
I am vengeance of that sloth
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>>8178923
I've not seen any images of Pandora and Remmy going at it outside of the pegging one.
As for pegging, I wasn't trying to imply that it was abusive, but it'd still be nice if he got to do the fucking. Especially to a nice lady like Pandora. I know 'Dora probably gets a lot of people asking her out, but she doesn't seem tied down to anybody and Remmy is a rather unique sight in Pack Street considering it's mostly preds. I could see her being interested in him.
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>Before he could let out a groan, her mouth locked onto his.
>Her hips continued their quick motions, and the bed creaked and their bodies rocked together. But their mouthed never parted.
>With his eyes rolling back, his back arching and his constant twitching, she knew she was overstimulating him.
>His paws grabbed onto her ass, and tried to hold her, probably to slow her down, but she refused.
>She pulled her mouth away from his, and goaded him, "You like that, Slick?"
>He didn't respond with words, just sharp gasps of air and the occasional yelp when her hips met his exceptionally hard.
>As his own hips gave a few erratic jerks, she felt his knot flare. She didn't slow down, though.
>Nick II let out a wet, choking groan as his body jerked up and pulled her into a bear hug, with his hips pushing hard against hers. She could feel his legs pressing against her ass and thighs as she continued trying to work his cock like a piston.
>But it was to no avail, as the twitchy todd had a death grip on her.
>Then the second most wonderful sensation of her life, something she also hadn't felt in years, finally returned to her.
>She felt hot, thick, vulpine seed streak and splash inside her.
>Falling back tot he bed, she laid them both on her side, but kept her legs watched around his waist.
>After a few second of silence, Nick let her go from his death grip, and softly pressed her lips against his.
>She looked into his youthful, piercing green eyes, and he looked into her older violet ones.
>Pulled away, he whispered, "I love you, Judy,"
>She whispered back, "I love you too, Nick,"
>Moving her hips just a tiny bit, she watched as his body shook and his eyes fluttered.
>Breathily, he warned her, "Don't do that!" and she bit back, "Gonna have to make-"
>She stopped as he lashed his muzzle forward, and sunk his teeth into her neck, right where he'd always marked her.
>"I've missed this," she moaned, closing her eyes.
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>...And so it came to pass that the todd, who once bathed in the rejuvenating blood of a hundred virgins, turned eighteen.
>He knotfucked his milf adopted mother so hard that night, she had a heart attack. He found her a new body to live through, though, so it wasn't much of a problem.
>He did kind of feel bad for the previous occupant.
>Twenty-six year old Cotton Hopps.
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